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Written for #FourLinePoems.

Er, trying something a bit different. Are the words clear enough..?
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~anapests-and-ink Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love the visual edge you've given this poem. It really adds to the message and the overall effectiveness of the piece (not that it needs anything extra to be powerful :heart:). I'm excited that you've found this form; you do so much with it!
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*SCFrankles Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks ^^ I wasn't sure if the "wall" made the piece too "noisy" and difficult to read.

I really appreciate your enthusiasm :blushes: I must get going with the four line poems again!

(And thank you for the fave. Mustn't forget my manners :D)
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~anapests-and-ink Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
The wall wasn't noisy at all! It just gave shape to the poem.
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~TheChesherCat Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Clever! And yes, quite clear. :)
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*SCFrankles Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks ^^ I'm glad it looks clear to you - it looked so much better in Word ^^"
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*Hermetic-Wings Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I have a painture on my wall...It is a poem but some part of it is not clear! Suppose some of the words are out of focus so only some word can be seen. I mean just the same thing you with that poem... Imopressed much :D
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*SCFrankles Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much ^_^ And thank you for all the faves ^^"
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*Hermetic-Wings Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Alllllways pleasure dear friend :d
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