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Giving the Bride Away

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Third Person Plural

Father: Teenagers are too immature to know what’s best for them.


Third Person Neuter

Mother: This country just doesn’t have the same standard of morals.


Third Person Masculine

Father: He’s the perfect choice for her.


Third Person Feminine

Mother: She’s not too young. It’s normal to be nervous.


Second Person

Father & Mother: You should be excited on your wedding day.


First Person

Bride: This isn’t what I want.
66 words (plus 6 deleted words).

Written for Flash Fiction Month 2014: Day 17


Challenge #8: This is Getting Serious
  • Element ONE: Your story must have a theme of social justice.
  • Element TWO: Your story must be serious in nature.
  • Element THREE: Your story must not use any first person pronouns (I, we, us, my, mine, our, ours, etc). 
Er, I have played around with the last requirement and made a feature of it. "I" has been used and then crossed out again, so it doesn't strictly appear in the story - I thought that worked so well with my theme. But I hope this still means my piece fulfills the challenge.
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NamelessShe's avatar
Very interesting. I enjoyed this! Especially the deleted line. :D