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Judgmental

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November 1, 2016
Judgmental by SCFrankles
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Gerald stepped out of the fitting room in a floor length evening gown, slinky and figure hugging.

“Oh, God,” said Cynthia. She put her head in her hands.

Gerald frowned and retreated back behind the curtain.

He reappeared in a pencil skirt and pussy bow blouse, both fitting rather snugly.

“Gerald!” muttered Cynthia. “You’re embarrassing me.”

Looking daggers, Gerald disappeared again, reappearing for the last time in a catsuit that left nothing to the imagination.

“Well, I am not going out with you looking like that!” said Cynthia.

Gerald straightened his shoulders. “You know, you could be a little more supportive.”

Cynthia sighed. “Gerald, you are really going to have to face it. You’re just not a size 10.”
119 words.

Written for Flash Fiction Month 2015: Day 5.


There was the suggestion that we might like to go outside today and watch people.

Yeah, no.

But I did use the One-Word Prompt: Judgement ^^
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