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Love Letters

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Envy.

A love changes to alone.
Written for #SixWordStories' Word Prompt: Love.

Not sure if this one works... "Envy" is obviously pronounced "N,V" and if you switch these letters about "a love" becomes "alone"... (I'm going to shut up now ^^")

I've written a four line poem, Do the Maths, based on this story: [link] .
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elphieofkiamoko's avatar
You know, I didn't get the "N" and "V" connection until you said it, but I still found this piece really touching, because when I read it, I felt like it was saying that relationships in which jealousy and envy are persistent occurrences often end in disaster--or loneliness. So, in effect, envy separates the two parties, changing "a love" to "alone".
Either way, you have a masterpiece on your hands. ^-^