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Passionate, lingering kisses.

Recurring, viral infection.
Written for #SixWordStories' Theme Prompt: Keepsake
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3wyl Sep 28, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Ooh, interesting. o.O

I am reminded of.. 'Love in the Time of Cholera' where love is related to cholera and all, if that makes sense. It's quite interesting how we could take it quite literally as well as the opposite, almost... like perhaps it is literal with the way there is a true infection, or maybe it's metaphorical with the way the kisses could be like...

Great stuff! Quite profound with the way it's so open. :nod:
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SCFrankles Sep 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
You're quite a deep person, aren't you..? (Thank heavens "Love in the Time of Cholera" is something I've actually read ^^") I did intend for the infection to be literal and, on the surface, for the story to be funny. But I did think there could be a deeper meaning - the infection could be a comment on the relationship... Thank you so much for taking the time to think about and comment on my story. It means a lot!
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3wyl Oct 1, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
A weird one, more like. :P

That's quite interesting!

Yes, perhaps so! :glomp:
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SCFrankles Sep 19, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. I will take that as a compliment... ^_^
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As intended. :D
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anapests-and-ink Sep 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Best keepsake ever.

(your six word stories are the best way to start the day :heart:)
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SCFrankles Sep 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
And thank you for the fave! (Damn. Forgot again...)
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SCFrankles Sep 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much for the extremely kind compliment ^^ Not one of my best but I'm getting back into the routine of writing them. And when will we be seeing another sws from you, madam..?
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anapests-and-ink Sep 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
eh, I think I'll be leaving the sws mastery to you.
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