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The Hero's Return

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There had been weeks of solitary searching—that mighty river leading him on and on—but at last Albert Braithwaite had found his heart’s desire.

And he had survived the ensuing test—those agonising days of waiting and contemplation.

But finally he had his reward! A reward beyond what he had hoped for; a reward beyond what he had ever expected!

At first he was gladdened by this good fortune but slowly he began to consider. Was this too much for one man? Did he in truth deserve to keep it all?

All day and all night, he examined his heart, and all day and all night the name of that mighty river pounded and pounded in his mind. And finally Albert knew what he had to do...

He accessed his account and let Amazon know they had sent him two toasters, when he had truly only ordered one.
149 words.

Written for Flash Fiction Month 2017: Day 1

Well, off to an excellent start - a day late with the first challenge ^^" But anyway, the challenge I ended up with yesterday was:


Big Damn Heroes


ONE: The main point of view character is a "hero"

TWO: The plot hinges upon the trope What You Are In the Dark.



And handily I did have a hero I had made earlier. Here are Albert Braithwaite's other adventures from FFM 2015 & FFM 2016:


A Saga of CerealLet us sing of Albert Braithwaite and his quest! His voyage to the supermarket! His mission to buy cornflakes!
And so he approached the supermarket and gained entrance.
Everywhere there were temptations that sang to him. But his wisdom was strong. Do not look directly at the showy sirens who would take your gold. Rather look down towards the own brand items. For they are better value.
He travelled on.
In his path were clusters of creatures with tongues to talk, but neither eyes nor ears to perceive him. His many requests of “Excuse me, please. I’d quite like to get through” went unheeded.
Temporarily defeated, he retreated and found another way through the maze.
But the glamour was becoming stronger. He felt his reason starting to leave him. Taking shelter by the cheese and onion crisps, he produced pen and ink and captured the words as they floated from his mind.
And lo! Albert strode forward, looking neither to the left or right, but keeping his path straight and tr
    A Light in the DarknessAlbert Braithwaite gazed down in triumph at his treasure. His search had indeed not been in vain. For he had endeavoured to discover the very last of these elusive and sought after glass orbs.
He plucked it from its soft casket and held it reverently, fearful of causing it any harm.
But he could not rest long. He looked upwards and set his jaw.
There was yet further to go.
Thus, by the rays of the glistening moon, he began to climb—up and up, ever on. Until he was able to stretch up his arm, and in doing so cautiously touch the orb’s final resting place.
He delicately eased the orb in and bestowed upon it a resolute twist.
He drew his hand away.
The orb held!
As swiftly as he dared, he made his descent. And once he was on firm ground, he felt in the gloom for the appointed protrusion.
‘Tis a fool who assumes the journey is ended before taking the final step. Albert Braithwaite closed his eyes, inhaled deeply, and pressed the protrusion.
All at once, everywhere was bat
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WindySilver's avatar
Haha, I love how this ended. Totally didn't see the more mundane setting coming! :D